Bài mẫu có phân tích

Task 1 — Bài mẫu thư Informal

Đề bài: Write a letter to your friend telling them about a recent birthday celebration. Mention: who celebrated, what you did, and your favourite moment.

▶ Task 1 — Informal Letter (Birthday)B1

Dear Linh,

How are you? I hope you’re doing well! I’m writing to tell you about my sister’s birthday party last weekend — it was such a wonderful occasion!

My sister turned 20 on Saturday, so our family organised a small surprise party at home. We decorated the living room with balloons and flowers, and my mother cooked all of her favourite dishes. When my sister walked in and saw everyone, she was completely surprised and started crying with happiness!

The moment I enjoyed most was when we all sang “Happy Birthday” together and she blew out the candles on her cake. She looked so happy, and it made all of us feel really emotional. After that, we shared stories and looked at old family photos, which was a lot of fun.

I really wish you could have been there! Let’s plan to celebrate your birthday together soon. I can’t wait to hear from you!

Best wishes, Hoa

Cấu trúc được dùng:

Từ nối ghép câu: so, and, when
Mệnh đề quan hệ: which was a lot of fun
Mệnh đề thời gian: When my sister walked in…

Phân tích:

Task Fulfillment: Đề yêu cầu 3 ý (ai, làm gì, khoảnh khắc yêu thích) — bài viết đủ cả 3
Organization: 4 đoạn rõ ràng
Vocabulary: organised, decorated, surprised, emotional, occasion — đa dạng
Grammar: câu ghép với when, so, and; mệnh đề quan hệ which
Số từ: khoảng 175 từ — trên mức tối thiểu 120 từ

Task 1 — Bài mẫu thư Formal

Đề bài: Write a letter of complaint to a hotel manager about problems during your stay. Mention: the problems you experienced and what action you expect.

▶ Task 1 — Formal Letter of ComplaintB1

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the service I received during my stay at your hotel from 15th to 17th March.

First of all, the room I was given was not clean when I checked in. The bathroom had not been cleaned properly, and there were no fresh towels provided. Despite reporting this to the front desk, the problem was not resolved until the following morning, which caused significant inconvenience.

Furthermore, the Wi-Fi connection in the room was extremely poor throughout my stay. As I was travelling for business, this was a serious problem as I was unable to work effectively.

I would appreciate it if you could investigate these matters and provide a partial refund as compensation for the inconvenience I experienced.

I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours faithfully, Nguyen Thi Mai

Cấu trúc được dùng:

Câu bị động: had not been cleaned, was not resolved
Mệnh đề quan hệ: which caused significant inconvenience
Từ nối: Furthermore, Despite, As
Template complaint: I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with… / I would appreciate it if you could…

Phân tích:

Task Fulfillment: Đề yêu cầu 2 ý (vấn đề + hành động mong muốn) — bài đủ cả 2
Tone: Lịch sự, trang trọng — Dear Sir/Madam + Yours faithfully
Organization: 4 đoạn rõ ràng
Vocabulary: dissatisfaction, inconvenience, compensation — từ formal

Task 2 — Bài mẫu Essay

Đề bài: Some people think that university education is very important for success in life. Others believe that practical work experience is more valuable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Suggested: job opportunities / personal development / real-world skills

▶ Task 2 — Discuss Both Views EssayB1

Nowadays, there is a growing debate about whether university education or practical work experience is more important for success in life. While both have their own advantages, I personally believe that a combination of both is the most effective path.

On the one hand, university education provides students with many benefits. First, it opens up better job opportunities, as many employers require a degree when hiring candidates. Moreover, university life helps students develop important personal skills such as critical thinking, time management, and communication. For example, group projects and presentations prepare students for real working environments.

On the other hand, practical work experience is also highly valuable. People who start working early develop real-world skills that cannot always be learned in a classroom. For instance, working part-time or doing internships allows students to understand how businesses operate. In addition, work experience can sometimes lead directly to full-time employment.

In conclusion, both university education and work experience have their own merits. However, I personally believe that combining academic study with practical experience is the best approach, as it prepares young people for the challenges of the modern workplace.

Cấu trúc được dùng:

Từ nối: On the one hand / On the other hand / Moreover / In addition / However
Mệnh đề quan hệ: People who start working… / skills that cannot be learned…
Câu bị động: cannot always be learned in a classroom
Câu điều kiện ngầm: as it prepares young people…
Template Discuss Both Views: đúng cấu trúc Intro → View A → View B → Conclusion

Phân tích:

Task Fulfillment: Thảo luận đủ 2 quan điểm + ý kiến cá nhân rõ ràng
Organization: Intro → Body 1 → Body 2 → Conclusion
Vocabulary: critical thinking, real-world skills, internships, merits
Số từ: khoảng 260 từ — trên mức tối thiểu 250 từ

▶ 🔼 Nâng cao — Phân tích bài B2 và điểm khác biệt

Bài B1 vs B2 — Task 2

B1 Introduction:

“Nowadays, there is a growing debate about whether university education or practical work experience is more important.”

B2 Introduction (nâng cao hơn):

“In an increasingly competitive job market, the question of whether formal academic qualifications or hands-on professional experience holds greater value for career success has sparked considerable debate.”

Điểm khác biệt:

B2 dùng từ học thuật phức tạp hơn: proponents, contend, ultimately, foundations
B2 paraphrase đề hoàn toàn, không lặp từ trong đề
B2 câu dài và phức tạp hơn — nhưng B1 không cần đến mức này